April 25, 2024

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[2024/ 4/ 20] The bar chart below shows the percentages of males between 16 and 25 years old who watched and participated in six kinds of sports.

【主体段分段】：

watching > participating一段（蓝色>橙色）

participating >watching一段（橙色>蓝色）

【开头段】

The bar chart presents information about the proportions of 16-to-25-year-old men watching and participating in 6 types of sports.

【概述段】

It is clear thatmore males preferred to engage in basketball, tennis and fishing rather than just watch these sports,whilethe figures for other 3 sportsshowed a different pattern.The smallest gapbetween the two groups of people could be found in basketball.

思路要点：

- basketball，tennis，fishing→橙色(participating)>蓝色(watching)；其余三种运动数据规律相反

- basketball：两色差距最小

【Body 1】

Looking at the information in more detail, we can see thatin terms of football, the proportion of male spectators(69%) wasmore than three times as large asthe figure for male participants.A similar gapbetweenthese two groups of peoplecould be found inrugby and horse riding and racing,wherethe figures for male viewersranked the second(45%) andthird place(30%) respectively.

思路要点：football, rugby, horse riding and racing（蓝色>橙色）

- football：蓝色(watching)是橙色(participating)的3倍多

- rugby & horse riding and racing：两色差距相似；蓝色(watching)分别排名第二、第三位

【Body 2】

In the other three types of sports,there were more players.This is especially true forfishing,wherethe percentage of participantswas the largest(35%),whilemerely 2% of the surveyed males preferred watching this activity. Tennis was chosen by roughly 10% of the participants, roughly5 times the figure forspectators.However, the two types of peopleshared a similar figure inbasketball,withapproximately 20%.

思路要点：basketball, tennis, fishing

- 其余三种运动：橙色(participating)>蓝色(watching)

- fishing：两色差距最大，橙色(participating)→35%，但蓝色(watching)→只有2%

- tennis：橙色(participating)→10%，大约是蓝色(watching)的5倍

- basketball：两色数据相似，大约为20%

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